Yes, beware the Mary-Sue!
N = Nice
Are your characters too nice? Too agreeable?
Readers don’t want perfection, they prefer reality.
Readers can relate to reality.
Too much niceness can seem artificial as Sweet-n-Low and turn off your readers.
I bet your favorite and most memorable characters were flawed and sometimes down right disagreeable.
Write characters who are engaging, interesting and filled with conflict. People who are most often warring with their own nature, or good and evil.
She typed the coordinates Mac had emailed into her smart phone. As luck would have it, the perp was an eight-hour drive from San Antonio. At least he was still in Texas, that would make things easier for her but harder for the hacker. Rachel smiled as she reached into her desk drawer and retrieved her sidearm. Kindness never killed anyone but she knew what did. She didn’t get her reputation by being nice. However, she always got her man.
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